I’ve read ‘Inside the Suit’, ( a wonderfully emotive, descriptive story full of sensory experiences that really bring your writing alive and touch the soul), and each short story that you write is like giving me another piece to add to the jigsaw that introduces new characters and enriches the pictures contoured up in my mind. I love the mastery you display in the choice of language used to sensitively describe the relationships between the characters - they become so real and credible. Another superb story!
“A man in a panda suit, slumped in a folding chair outside a faded arcade, the head off and resting on the ground beside him. His face was slick with sweat, the skin drawn and a little too pale, like he hadn’t slept properly in days.”
This conjures up such strong feelings. You’re truly putting something meaningful into your work, Wayne! This is powerful
I’ve read ‘Inside the Suit’, ( a wonderfully emotive, descriptive story full of sensory experiences that really bring your writing alive and touch the soul), and each short story that you write is like giving me another piece to add to the jigsaw that introduces new characters and enriches the pictures contoured up in my mind. I love the mastery you display in the choice of language used to sensitively describe the relationships between the characters - they become so real and credible. Another superb story!
“A man in a panda suit, slumped in a folding chair outside a faded arcade, the head off and resting on the ground beside him. His face was slick with sweat, the skin drawn and a little too pale, like he hadn’t slept properly in days.”
This conjures up such strong feelings. You’re truly putting something meaningful into your work, Wayne! This is powerful
Thanks Amanda!
I enjoyed the vividness of your writing, both in presenting the place and the characters.
Thanks Suparna!
I loved this! Short but poignant message, very well written!
Thanks for the feedback 👍🏻 Glad you enjoyed it.