I really enjoyed the theatrical build up in this story, the very detailed descriptions and wonderful choice of language. The characters spring to life and I love the underlying comic ‘buffoonery’ in the mannerisms and actions of Gil, perfectly contrasted by the sensible and down- to -earth Rivera. A great story!
I really enjoyed the theatrical build up in this story, the very detailed descriptions and wonderful choice of language. The characters spring to life and I love the underlying comic ‘buffoonery’ in the mannerisms and actions of Gil, perfectly contrasted by the sensible and down- to -earth Rivera. A great story!
Oh I loved the vivid imagery and dialogue! I felt like I was there watching it unfold! I really enjoyed this 🧡🫶
Glad you enjoyed it Amanda, thanks for reading and for the encouragement 👍🏼. Wayne
Rivera’s silence and tightly wound demeanor are so well done. You’ve managed to show deep history and moral weight without spelling it out.
Thanks for your feedback Allen!